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Pirate!SpainxPirate!Reader A Pirate's Life! Ch 14

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You push your foot forward, smacking Alonso in the chest.  He falls to the ground, his breath knocked out of him.  Around the two of you, the two crews are cheering pretty loud.  You ready yourself, jumping on the balls of your feet.

He suddenly gets up, and punches you.  You try to lessen the pain, by putting your arms up, and shaping them as an X.  Pain floods, your hands, making you wince a little.  You push forward, by swiping your feet on the ground, making him fall backwards.  He puts his hands backwards to catch himself, and when his hands touch the hard wood planks, he back flips.

The two of you, are now circling each other, like animals.  The first to make the first move, is Alonso.  He pushes forward, and kicks upwards, snapping your neck back.  You stumble backwards, grimacing as pain makes your head spin.

"This is all you can throw at me?"  Alonso taunts, jumping left and right.

"You haven't seen what I can do full power,"  You almost snarl, your (e/c) eyes narrowing.

He grins, jeering at you.  "Then come at me, oh wondrous captain."

You suddenly lunge forward, your eyes only focused on Alonso.  You kick your right foot out, surprising him.  He falls down to the ground, rolling just in time to your fist slamming against the woodened plank.  You shake it, cringing as your hand starts to ache.  He sends out punches after punches, only hitting you three times.  Three times too much; each punch is worth the breath being knocked out of you.

Soon, the two of you have equal bruises-already they are turning a light blue-all over your bodies.  That being said, you both aren't about to let the other win by the other collapsing in exhaustion; one has to surrender, for the other to win.

Alonso springs forward, jabbing his knee in your stomach.  Your breath is caught in your throat, but you aren't going to let him win!  You retaliate by smashing your fist in his ear.  He lets out a strangled gasp, and grabs his ear, staggering backwards.  You grab a fistful of his hair, while he's still disoriented, and slam his head on the deck.

"So, who's the winner?"  You ask sweetly.

"You,"  He groans, still a little dizzy.

With a snicker, you leap off of him.  You hold out your hand, and you drag him up.  "I admit, you're pretty good; your one of the first men who has actually landed multiple hits,"  You say, grinning slightly.  You massage one of the bruises on your cheek, wincing a little.

"I'll check that off on one of my accomplishes,"  He says, his brown eyes dancing with laughter.

"If any of your goals are like that one, then you're in for a world of disappointment,"  You retort back.

"I thought we were done, now we're going to have a verbal fight?"  Alonso demanded, throwing his tan arms up in the air.

"You would also loose that too,"  You tease.

"Thanks, it warms my heart that a girl captain would say that,"  Alonso says, rolling his chocolate brown eyes.

"Awesome, since I seriously needed to know that.  Now, if you excuse me, I'll be in my room, trying to see if my arms are still alive,"  You say, stretching your arms behind your back, though wincing a little.

"Have fun,"  Alonso says, waving you away.

You walk into your ship room, flopping down on the bed.  You let out a stifled cry, as your back seethes with agony.  Damn that man throws good punches.  You groan to yourself, putting your arms slowly behind your head.

"You know, I'm not used to seeing you so pathetic chica."

Antonio's voice sounds surprisingly close, and you rocket out of bed, letting out a grunt as pain shoots up and down your back.  "Oh shut up,"  You say, massaging your shoulder.  Your (e/c) eyes wander to him.  Antonio leans against the wall next to your door, one of his eyebrows raised.

"I've definitely seen you in your better days,"  He snorts, a smile tugging on the corner of his mouth.

"Thanks a lot.  I seriously needed for you to tell me that,"  You say, sarcasm dripping in your voice.

"Why were you fighting Alonso, when we just back from the fight with Decam?"  Antonio asks suddenly.

"Because I hate feeling weak, and unable to help myself,"  You stubbornly say.

"You could have easily died in that fight,"  He snaps back.

"Oh, so now it's bad that a girl stood up for herself and didn't act all helpless?"  You yell, your voice getting louder.

"What would your crew do if you died?"  He yells back, his green eyes flashing.

"Johnny would have led them!  You saw how kickass he was; he was taking men twice his size, and they barely got a scratch on them!"  You shouted, anger feuling you.

"You can be strong, but that was completely reckless what you did,"  He says, his voice deadly quiet.  "I admired your strength, but what you did with the prince was quite stupid; I know those kind of princes, and I know he will come back to get you back.  This time, I won't help you."

With that comment, he turns and leaves, leaving you completely confued, and surprisingly hurt.
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Why hello there DA! :D

I'm here, still hacking out a lung, but pleased I actually got something done. :XD:

Annnywho, as always, tell my any mistakes I made and enjoy. ^^


Oh, btw, any critics are welcome, but if you're going to say: "I don't like this character cuz she/he's annoying.", I'm just going to ignore you. I want actual critic. Like: "If you changed x, y, and z and created more depth to this character, it would make more sense." I mean that kind of critic.

You can't just be a troll, and say: "I hate everything about this, so change it." Actually tell my why you hate it.

I'm asking you guys this, because I want to be an author when I grow up, and DA is kind of like a stepping stone for me. :D
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Toni... You asymmetrical bastard, take that back! :iconcryforeverplz: