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Holy-  How on earth did I get 150 watchers?! O_o  Honnestly, I can't thank you guys enough! T^T  I am sooo honored to have watchers like you guys.  Now, I don't care if you followed me from the start, or just started, I love each and every one of you.  If I could, I would hug you~ ...but there's the whole thing of a screen in the way...  Yeah.... :D

So yes, this is 150 watchers fanfiction.  Seriously thank you guys!  :'D

UNTO THE SHOW!

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RPOV

You sigh, leaning against your chair.  You had been feeling odd from the moment you woke up; you were a lot more tired than you usually were, and your brain felt really foggy.  Massaging your head, you look at the ceiling, wondering what's wrong with you.

Someone taps on your shoulder, making you glance behind you.  Concerned blue eyes meet your (e/c) eyes.  "Are you ok ma cherie?"  Francis asks.

You wave your hand, "Yeah, fine.  Just..."  You narrow your eyes, not sure what you felt like.

"Kesesese.  She's fine Francis.  (Name)'s just wondering on how to ask ze awesome me to ze dance,"  Gilbert laughs, wriggling his eyebrows.

"Hah, you wish,"  You snort, shaking your head in scorn.

"Well, then what's wrong chica?"  Antonio asks, looking seriously concerned.

"I'm fine."  You add when they look doubtfully at you, "Seriously guys, I really am."

The three glance at one another, then back at you.  "Whatever you say..."  The bell rings, ending your History class.  You gather your stuff, and head to Gym class.


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You pull your gym shirt over your head, shaking your head, as fogginess threatens to claim your brain.

"Are you sure you're ok?"  Your friend asks, putting her hands on her hips.  She's been watching you, since you got out of History, nervousness in her eyes.

You sigh, and smile at her.  "Like I said to the three, I'm fine,"  You reassure her.

She rubs her chin, then nods slowly.  "Well, if you say so."

Your gym teacher blows her whistle, quieting down the chatter in the changing room.  "Ok girls, today, we will be with the boys."  The chatter begins once again; it was pretty rare for the two gym classes to be together.  "That does not mean you may goof off,"  She loudly says, silencing the talking.  With an annoyed glare at everyone, the teacher nods.  "Ok girls, lets head up."

You and your friend head up to the gym, your sneakers squeaking against the polished ground.  The other girls split up into smaller groups, and worm their way into the groups of boys.  "¡Chicas, hola!"  Antonio appears from one of the crowds, Francis and Gilbert in tow.

"Hey guys,"  Your friend greets, waving her hand.  "We were just about to find you guys."  She then punches you in the shoulder, making you wince.  "This little dork right here hasn't been looking too good."

You rub your shoulder, and muter, "I already said I was ok."

"En es-tu sûre*?"  Francis asks, reaching out to you.  Bu before he can touch you, your gym teacher blows her whistle, making everyone clap their hands over their ears.

"Ten laps around the gym,"  She yells, letting go of her whistle.

Rolling their eyes at you, the Bad Touch Trio heads off on the laps.  Everyone follows after them, but grumbles all the same.  Your friend chuckles, and grabs your wrist.  "Come on, let's get this over with, shall we?"  You nod, smiling slightly.  The two of you take off, setting your pace slowly.

After a couple of minutes of running, you start to see something floating in your eyes, kind of like when you stare at a bright light, then look away.  You blink, trying to get it out of your vision, but it gets bigger.

Suddenly, you feel yourself collapse, the last thing you remember is arms grabbing you.



~Le Time Skip~

Your eyes fly open, and you groan, your head throbbing.  You sit up, though instantly regret it.  Your vision swarms, and you feel yourself sway.  Hands press against your back, steadying you.  "Careful there chica,"  Antonio voice says, hands leaving you.  He appears in front of you, smiling cheerfully.  "You took quite a hit to la cabeza,"  He says, patting your shoulder affectionately.

"Are you feeling ok ma chérie?"  Francis asks, appearing in the room and walking in, making Antonio drop his hand.

"Ja, you took quite a fall frau,"  Gilbert comes in after Francis, frowning at you.

"Yes, but I'm actually pretty tired,"  You admit, looking at him.

"That sounds right,"  The nurse says, leaning against the doorway.  "You fainted, and you smacked your head against the ground,"  She explains, walking up to you.  She touches your head, and when her hand brushes over a tender spot, you wince.  The nurse steps back and continues  "You should feel lucky; if these three hadn't caught you, you might've hit the bleachers."  The nurse taps a pen on her lips.  "Is this your first time fainting?"

You slowly nod, and blink, trying to get the sleepiness out of your system.  The nurse nods slowly.  "It must've been a shock to you."  she laughs quietly, and then turns to the three.  "I want you three to take her home, ok?"  The Bad Touch Trio nod, taking their eyes off of you.  

With Francis' and Antonio's, the four of you head out of school, and to Gilbert's car.  You climb in the back, stretching your legs across the seats.  You close your eyes, and exhaustion takes over.

Sleep takes control, and lets go of you one and off.  You faintly remember having the feeling of being carried, and hearing doors opening and closing.  The last thing you remember, before darkness comes, is the feeling of a blanket gently being pulled over you.  

You are pretty dang lucky to have those three as friends.
Honnestly, I was so stunned when I saw my Watcher counter at 150. I cannot believe so many of you guys think I'm worthy to be watched.

You guys deserve a cookie! :cookie:

:XD: Anywho, I wanted to thank you guys with this. Not sure if it's good, since I kind of thought of it today.

But as always, please enjoy, and tell me any mistakes I made.

I freaking love you guys, I really do! :)

*En es-tu sûre- Are you sure?

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XxEmeraldMayxX Featured By Owner May 24, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
AHMAYZING!!
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lillystripes Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2013  Student General Artist
WOW!! Amazing story.  I have read a lot of BTT X reader stories and I can say that this one is on my top ten. :TheClap: Veneciano Italy (Epic Waving) [Hetalia Axis Power] Yuiko-Kuruguya-Lovely (Little Busters!) 
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UnluckyAmulet Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
The last time I fainted, somebody tried to put their coat on me and I was like, "Nooo, too hot!" If only it was these dudes who had been there. XD
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InsaneObsession Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
Yes!
I am friends with the Awesome Prussia,
The adorable Spain,
And... the perverted France! who I may or may not have a thing for. He is pervy, but caring too..>///<
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18-36-alisterafanan Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
♥♣
♠♦😭😆😱😎
I Love You As An Autthor
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Vanessarblack Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013
I fainted once...it sucked:(
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Keira-Giordano Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2013  Student Writer
Yah me too... I hit my head on my arm chair when I fell...lol
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InsaneObsession Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013
I fainted only once aswell!
When I woke up I couldn't breathe at all. o____o
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Keira-Giordano Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Student Writer
i hate fainting...it gave me a major headache
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013
I've fainted before. It's actually kinda funny. I was sitting on the ground because I wasn't feeling so good, so I didn't fall far, and I wasn't out for long, but it really is the weirdest thing ever. And, it would've been nice if these guys had been around.
Great story. :)
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CrystalRainbow8 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'AAAAAAWWWWWW!!!!!
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NaruhinaLuvLuvLuv Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I wish this would have happened to me when I had Pneumonia a couple of days ago!!
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Anonymous-Lizard Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
0^0 Your watchers are now 152~
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OldRivalShipper411 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Hehee, Spaiiin. I mean,,, Spain, AND Prussia, AND Fraaance...!
The Bad Touch Trio is my favorite trio<3 The next one on the list being the Magic Trio, oh Norway! ~swoon~
Annyywaays, (probably the millionth time I've said 'anyways' in my comments...)
That was WONDERFUL! I don't say wonderful that much! At least I don't think so....
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DocileGloom Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Great story ;D Sort of feel like my reader self should go to a doctors though If I've casually fainted.
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
:XD: Why thank you!

And yeah, I was wondering if I should add that. Eh, next time :3
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Codex-Sanctimonia Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
YAY!
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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FalconBreathWCW Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
mah :D - claps - EPICS! Your such a good writer and you deserve 15 watchers x3 - computer hug -
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
D'awww why thank you! :D :iconspazhugplz:
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FalconBreathWCW Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
np x3
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
Why thank you! :D
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SayuriChou Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Congratulations on making the front page (for the time being...)
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
:iconshockplz: Wait what?!
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SayuriChou Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It was on the front page yesterday!~
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XxViidGamexX Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It's soooo cute! One tiny (unmentionned?) mistake would be that when Francis says "Are you sure?" In Frog-Language it would actually be "En es-tu sûre?" But other than that it was perfect! Loved it~! X3
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
:iconfacepalmplz: Gosh darnit! See, and this is why I hate Google translate. Thank you! :XD:
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popodu955 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
Je ne pensais pas que quelqu'un allait le remarquer ^^ Tu parles bien francais.
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XxViidGamexX Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Merci~! Mais ma langue maternelle, c'est le français. (Je suis québécoise!) ^w^
You're very welcome, by the way.
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popodu955 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012
Alors tu parles couramment français et anglais *o*
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XxViidGamexX Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, j'ai une passion pour les langues!! J'avais 6 ans quand j'ai commencé mon anglais, et maintenant j'ai fait 3 ans d'espagnol à l'école jusqu'à ce jour.... J'apprends le japonais depuis 2 et je vais bientôt commencer le russe et l'allemand par moi-même!! Et après tout.... J'ai seulement 14 ans.... Thehe! ^w^
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popodu955 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
J'ai commencé à apprendre le japonais moi aussi :D (Mais pour l'instant je ne connais que les formules de politesse...) Je n'ai que des profs d'espagnol assez détestables, donc je n'aime pas trop cette langue... J'ai commencé l'anglais en primaire, au CP je crois. J'ai commencé le suédois il y a un mois et j'adore *.* Il le russe est assez compliqué, non? Tout ce que je sais dire c'est "menya zovut Pauline" ^^
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XxViidGamexX Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow! C'est vraiment cool! Bonne chance dans vos études~
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popodu955 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Merci :)
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Such an adorable story! :heart: back at you! :D
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
:iconblushplz: D'aww why thank you!
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Svitavotara Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
You're very welcome! ^^
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FairieChick Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Love this! I enjoy APHxReader love stories both I really enjoyed the friendship in this one. Well done! Oh, before I forget I only saw one spelling error in the last paragraph, the "and" was spelled "adn".
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
:XD: Geez... I hate when I make the simplest mistake. Thank you for telling me! :D
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FairieChick Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No prob hun. I feel ya, I frequently misspell words. Thank goodness I have a mother that will check my homework before I turn it in.
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hatshere Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012
Awww!
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!!!! :D
This made my day!!
The story is sooo sweet! I love it :heart:
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
No thank you! :D
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Stained-GlassHeart82 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Who cares if there's a screen in the way! :iconletmehugyouplz: :hug: lol
Nice job by the way!! :) I really enjoy reading your stories. They always make me happy!
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
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D'awww why thank you! :D
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Stained-GlassHeart82 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
No problem! :D
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MoonstarTheDragoncat Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aaaawwwww!!!! They're so sweet! ^___^ <3

(Ich liebe dich too, you awesome person, you~. ♥)
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
:icondragonnodplz:

(More awesome than Prussia? :XD:)
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MoonstarTheDragoncat Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:D

(About as awesome. Maybe a little more. :iconheplz:
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TwilightDreams56 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012  Student Writer
(:XD: Why thank you~)
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